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  1. Hmmmmm…I’ve to take a deep breath before commenting on this one.
    It’s so fabulous! It’s like going for the long walk of no return. You know, feeling jittery when the girl fails to see your love.

    OMG! am I commenting or rambling over your Haiku? Is love in the air? :)

    Ok seriously, you hit the nail on the head! :)

    1. Omo

      Thank you Balqis- I’m assuming this haiku tells the moments well! :)

      1. Yes, it is indeed! :)

      2. i’m quit wondering though… it could be
        1) i want to ask you out but it looks like Im not going to have a chance but I still want too and I am running out of time, so if I ask and you said no them you lose your chance.
        2) I’m done with this S*** and all your dramas so better make it right because if I ever walk out that door I ant coming back..

        which one..?? (wink wink)

  2. woah! That’s almost as badass as hitting below the belt!!!
    (First time I read it as “I wont come back a girl” hehe)
    Amazing haiku man! Really impressed.

    Btw this can be interpreted in two ways. Either you’re asking the girl out cause time is short or you’re hinting her for a break up :)
    Either ways… really powerful stuff!

    1. Omo

      You’ve Eagle eyes Harish! Thanks for the lovely comment. ;)

      1. which makes me wonder which shoes are you in right now hehehehe

  3. ahmp!
    are you heart broken at the moment lol!
    i just notice the last few haikus are like saying “darn I want to kick her butt out of the curve hahaha”

    1. Omo

      LOL! Should every poem have a note kinda like “Don’t think about the writer, think about what it tells.” ;)

      1. dont forget the song of a singer is the reflection of his soul – William Shakespeare.
        so the words of a poet is the reflection of whats inside his heart.. hehehehe

      2. Omo

        Less idea whether those of us can’t sing have worse soul or what! ;)

        I’ve having best time, I can say, may be people can write better poem when they have worse time?

        Thank you for wondering. (lol)

  4. Bella Foxx

    Hi, just followed you on blogger.com and wanted to check out your blog.

    1. Omo

      Thank you Bella for checking out. Keep coming ;)

  5. Bella Foxx

    Trying again to get the right image here.

  6. Man this is a nice shot and your words make picture perfect . Can you tell me the name of this location or it is a photoshop magic …

    1. Omo

      Thank you Atulperx! Indeed it’s a very nice picture- the place is real (Highway 56 – southwestern Utah) and photo itself a real picture. I just hunt it down and tried to influence those wording. ;)

      I gave the link, you can find at bottom of the Haiku. Here once again if that make easy for you.

  7. Simply awesome….

    Great capture !!

  8. Hi Omo, Wow, the picture is real? I thought it was photoshoped, but this looks like highway to heaven, very nice shot.

    1. Omo

      It’s so nice that hard to believe this picture is real. Thanks Soo How for stopping by. Keep coming. ;)

  9. kitty

    oh speechless! awesome !!

    1. kitty

      oops ! I didn’t see vishal’s comment..

    2. Omo

      I know, Kitty! ;D

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