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  1. Intense and brilliant. Questioning the very framework of positivity and negativity of a person. Brilliant stuff moon! You did it again!

    1. Omo

      Thanks Hary! I wasn’t sure if I should end with a question- so it took few weeks to post it here. :)

      1. I like that it ends on a question makes you stop and think for a while :)

      2. Omo

        Thanks Maria- it feels good to know that- I want ’em to think and think for awhile! :)

  2. I’m at a lose for words, again! So, let me repeat what Harish said, “You did it again!” :)

    1. Omo

      Yay! Really feel great to know that- :P

  3. kitty

    It depends on whether you’re pouring or drinking ;)
    btw, who drank the other half ? ( curious kitty ) :):)

    Sharp words ! Excellent Moon !! :)

    1. Omo

      Sure it’s curious Kitty- who else? :)

  4. Odliam

    I was looking for talent…

    And I found it! Great work Moon!!

    Now I will be pondering for hours about the demanding need to tilt the scale arm on the fulcrum!

    Half full? Needs to be emptied!
    Half emptied? Needs to be filled

    To be empty or not to be filled!
    To be full or not to be emptied!

    (Where do I heard this before?) :)

    1. Omo

      That’s it! To keep the brain cells busy-

      How long it takes to be emptied!
      How long it takes to be filled!

      When to be empty or when not to be filled!
      When to be full or when not to be emptied!

      Ah- some thoughts for not only hours- a week or month, would do? ;)

      (Echo, my friend!)

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  6. Amazing !!

    1. Omo

      Thank you, Amit! :)

  7. Brilliant!

    1. Omo

      Hey Mike- thanks for stopping by! :)

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