Haiku, Literature Feb 12, 2011Sep 29, 2015 Haiku: Vision Written by Omaar Osmaan (Vision) Half empty or full- Depends how you look at it. What you’re looking for? © Moonomo, 2011 ∙ Image Like this:Like Loading... Post navigation Haiku Trio: Memories, Time and Fortune Wish
Harish Iyengaar
Intense and brilliant. Questioning the very framework of positivity and negativity of a person. Brilliant stuff moon! You did it again!
Omo
Thanks Hary! I wasn’t sure if I should end with a question- so it took few weeks to post it here. :)
frisso
I like that it ends on a question makes you stop and think for a while :)
Omo
Thanks Maria- it feels good to know that- I want ’em to think and think for awhile! :)
Balqis
I’m at a lose for words, again! So, let me repeat what Harish said, “You did it again!” :)
Omo
Yay! Really feel great to know that- :P
kitty
It depends on whether you’re pouring or drinking ;)
btw, who drank the other half ? ( curious kitty ) :):)
Sharp words ! Excellent Moon !! :)
Omo
Sure it’s curious Kitty- who else? :)
Odliam
I was looking for talent…
And I found it! Great work Moon!!
Now I will be pondering for hours about the demanding need to tilt the scale arm on the fulcrum!
Half full? Needs to be emptied!
Half emptied? Needs to be filled
To be empty or not to be filled!
To be full or not to be emptied!
(Where do I heard this before?) :)
Omo
That’s it! To keep the brain cells busy-
How long it takes to be emptied!
How long it takes to be filled!
When to be empty or when not to be filled!
When to be full or when not to be emptied!
Ah- some thoughts for not only hours- a week or month, would do? ;)
(Echo, my friend!)
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Amit
Amazing !!
Omo
Thank you, Amit! :)
Mike Piro
Brilliant!
Omo
Hey Mike- thanks for stopping by! :)