Limerick: Typical Day

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   Balqis

   Oct 14, 2014 at 8:42 am

   Indeed, it’s exactly as you said! Life’s always a mixture of good and bad..like a cake, a mixture of so many ingredients to make it worth called a cake!

   You’re putting much thoughts in it, Omo. Nicely written!

   May I add?

   How lucky to survive a typical day,
   Since yesterday – ’twas Monday,
   Not to complain though, it’s life,
   In each step we take to avoid strife,
   The least, to keep gloominess at bay.

   Cheers! :)

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      Omo

      Oct 14, 2014 at 9:30 am

      Thank you, BB. I was a bit hesitating, this limerick may not bring a smile- while things are on down-side, though may bring a tiny smile if- up side is up! Love the idea of calling the mixture a “cake”- :p

      And, you’ve a nice addition- “to keep gloominess at bay”! Indeed- :D

      Cheers! :))

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         Balqis

         Oct 14, 2014 at 10:15 am

         I don’t know whether I could call it as a personification. You know well some ingredients in cakes which might be hazardous to one’s health if taken too much, so there goes the bad side of it while on the other hand, it will satisfy one’s sweet tooth.

         Don’t take me too seriously! Just a thought anyway. :)

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         Omo

         Oct 14, 2014 at 10:23 am

         Hahaha! Yummy taste doesn’t alert futuristic thoughts- it’s life! :)))

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   kitty

   Nov 28, 2014 at 5:27 am

   Hey! I liked it :))

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      kitty

      Nov 28, 2014 at 5:30 am

      ( guess, I’m not spamming your blog.. :)) )

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         Omo

         Nov 28, 2014 at 6:45 am

         Hahaha- are you? No, no, no. :))

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      Omo

      Nov 28, 2014 at 6:44 am

      Thank you, Kitty! :)

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