(Sadness)
Deep feelings fall into dark
You lose the light
Breaths remain cold, stone cold.
Burn it, dude! That’s hot!
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(Sadness)
Deep feelings fall into dark
You lose the light
Breaths remain cold, stone cold.
Burn it, dude! That’s hot!
Comments are closed.
stephanie
it’s a bit chillin…
hehe
Omo
Ya- Cheers the sadness! :)
Harish Iyengaar
I think you meant you ‘lose’ the light…
Omo
That’s right- my loose teeth! Fixed, thank you. :)
Balqis
OMG! the pic tells it all. Going to be submerged in the water with deep sadness in the eyes. Deep meanings within.
Is it some kind of an attempt to recover from the “cold” situation?
Omo
IDK! The original picture has been mod a bit by me. :)
Balqis
Well done! We can put our anger, frustration, sadness…whatever…in our Haikus. You’re getting better n better and can surely become my “sifu” (teacher). Like the connection of the pic with your title and wordings. Keep it up!
Omo
Thank you! This isn’t a Haiku but you’re very right! We all “sifu” of each one. It feels good to being with great people like you! ;)
YGND
Another great one Moon. You are surely growing in your writing skills. Glad the challenge inspired you to put this out.
Omo
For the reference, It was a quick poem for the “Word Challenge” on Poetic Voices where the given words was: Dark, light, cold and hot.
You can see the link for it after the image source link.
TheFashionistaChik
I thought it was about depression and using marijuana to lift your spirits.
Omo
Hahahaha- I thought and find it describes that, too. LOL!
Aggie
There is a velvet sensuality to sadness. The photo and poem capture that beautifully. What a lovely way to turn something disliked into something admired.
Omo
Thank you, Aggie for the nice comment- good of you. Keep coming ;)
Odliam
Wow, Moon!
I lost my time surfing along and losing the opportunity to read this small gem you create from such a difficult feeling, mixing up a dark perception with the obscure den of an evil turn which without light can burn!
Congrats!
Omo
:)
(I lost words, your comment gave a deep happiness!)