16 Comments

  1. Guess it’s human nature to make empty promises :(

    1. Omo

      It is- but realizing what is empty or full we need to learn for the better. :)

  2. Wow! there’s so much truths in this Haiku. You say it so clearly. Yes, people promise but not keeping it. They just let it go astray. How sad for someone who expects it. It’s like waiting for an eternity to make the promise comes true. It’s better not to promise but do it, if you could.

    A very nice Haiku and I love it for the great message worth pondering. Congrats for the 21st round! Keep going, buddy! :)

    1. Omo

      We better practice to do things while we can- human usually tend to promise and forget- we need to understand the priority and involve our self accordingly. All is matter when things done! :0)

      Thank you BB! I’m looking forward to put more life-style in Haiku. ;)

  3. If you could have I’m sure you would add “very” to the last line of Promise.

    1. Omo

      May be, “very” is vary! :)

  4. kitty

    Nice haiku duo..especially I liked the second one ;)
    I’m always short of words while commenting :)

    1. Omo

      Short words telling lots of, thank you! ;)

  5. This is such a sweet haiku. True gifts are the ones that come from the heart. Love the image too! Thank you.

    1. Omo

      Right you’re- our heart truly add the priceless value! Thanks for the nice words. :)

  6. Odliam

    Nicer and nicer! (Mad Hatter would say, taking his top hat and adding: Chapeau, dude! Hmmm. I don’t know about the dude word!)

    You add Philosophy to Poetry!

    Don’t be too harsh to human species, we are limited, sometimes we mean to make Promises true… Sometimes we are only mean! :) (Pun, pun, pun… Punish!!

    (I’ve got you Elf!, keep out of the keyboard you funny, sonny of a gunny!!).

    1. Omo

      Long live Mad Hatter and the Chapeau! :):)

      Yay- common P!

      Pun is fun and promise isn’t for keeping it- either astray or else- fill it! We mean and we meant! ;)

      Sonny of a gunny!! wow!

  7. nice ..well said

    some keep it and some let it go[promise]

    1. Omo

      Thanks Geet! Nice to see you stopping by! ;)

  8. It is the error of man to come up with the concept of promise. Our very own imperfection makes us unsuitable of its practice :-)

    1. Omo

      Thanks Walter, very nice point! :)

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