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  1. Omo, I could feel the pain in the lines of this Haiku. You’re right indeed, if pain is what we go through, there’s hope to recover from it if we wish to. So, let’s not give up hope no matter how “painful” life is.

    Excellent Haiku! I’m glad you had it posted. Thank you for sharing. :)

    1. Omo

      Thank you so much, BB. :)

      Its true hope for recovering will do, only when Pain hides even that hope- worlds seems fatal! Gladly, we human sooner or later tend to hang on with “hope” even in a greater Pain!

      And that’s what keeps Pain in check-

  2. If you look closely, you’ll see that HOPE and PAIN have both four letters. This is why you can balance them. The only question is which one is heavier. This is a flower of many petals.

    Your haiku is so good, it shines in its excellence.

    I like it a lot!

    1. Omo

      The closer you look the less you see to judge which one is heavier- :))

      Wish the flower of many petals gives strength to both of the four letters words.

      Feeling great for you words, my friend.

  3. After a long time, reading a very nice haiku! :)

    1. Omo

      Glad to find you, Kitty- :))

      Thanks for the kind word!

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