(Eclipse)
I won’t follow you, no more
I won’t bother to even think of it
To those who fears, of loosing
I dread, you bring nonsense
To the world of my dream
Where every campaignship
Isn’t about lust or wealth- it’s about love
Will someone love, without being loved
I can’t’ follow you, sorry!
I better worship my lonely world.
Balqis
Yunno, Moon, I heard from radio news there’s going to be moon’s eclipse which we Malaysians can see it tonight at 1.20 a.m. till around 6 a.m. The title of your poem makes me think of the real eclipse! :D
But let me see…well, does the heart sound sober?. No, you aren’t going to be totally eclipsed by something. It’s clearly said “I won’t follow you, no more”. Keep your head high and make the right choice. :)
A love poem but a sad one. As the first person writing it, you know better. Where as me, guessing and trying to comprehend in my own way. Lovely piece! :)
Omo
Right you’re- this one inspired by the news of lunar eclipse! Eclipse happens for a while and things going back to usual but may be never remain same as before! I was trying to hold the sense of it- ;)
In the end, it’s lunatic- may be! (lol)
Balqis
Was thinking of the temporary darkness, yunno. LOL…some believe there are lunatics when the moon’s full! That’s when the eclipse over!! LOL
kitty
Oh ! So nice ! Mixed feelings with many shades in one go ! Darkness, sadness, disheartenment, anger… like a lunar eclipse, will stay for a few hours…or may be for a few days or months or more ! …but definetely will come out – full, bright and shining !
What’s next? Eagerly waiting ! :)
Omo
Brave! Catches the momenta and future- what should be the next? :)
Seocetek
I see a lunar eclipse in my country too , btw your poem really a great poem
Omo
I hope you enjoyed red moon during the lunar eclipse! Thank you for the kind word. :)
Ndaloe
the moon tonight like mocking laughter.
ridicule about my loneliness tonight
Omo
Ahho- try some music to ease the commendation! ;)
Tasha
Great poem, really touching!
Omo
Hey Tasha, thank you! :)
odliam
It is sad!
Wonderfully sad, my friend!
This losing of continuity, this sour menace of change is so actual, so real, that the heart shrink from it in dismay!
Beautifully done!!
Omo
Eclipse in hearts truly sad-
Your presence always feels great- my friend! :)
Aj Banda
why did I never read this before.. the poem itself is so beatiful.. It somehow touched a part of me.. ^_^
Omo
Thank you, AB- :)
Bazlaa norman
so good, perfect.:)