Poem: Doubt – Draft for myself

Doubt - Draft for myself - Poem

(Doubt – Draft for myself)

Who you are?
I didn’t have to ask myself, until
I realize I don’t have the answer.

I knew who I am- one of the human kind-
Live to alive the lifeline
And up for “change the world”.

I never doubt about my steps-
They are strong and ambitious, until
I reach the state of stability

Happiness and fun fulfilled my eyes

Sorrow and weakness wasn’t there at all
And I had to lookback-

Who you are? What is your purpose?

Am I the last person to ask myself!

Balqis

Mar 23, 2011 at 3:14 am

This is so thought provocating! One needs to ponder deep into every stanza for there are questions that need reasonable answers. A very beautiful write-up!

I love the last two lines. Big questions there.
1. Omo
  
  Mar 23, 2011 at 6:54 pm
  
  Thank you, BB! :)
Harish Iyengaar

Mar 26, 2011 at 11:29 pm

A question everyone asks themselves at almost EVERY stage in life…
It tends to remain unanswered..
1. Omo
  
  Mar 28, 2011 at 1:23 am
  
  Ya- And with some brainstorm and mumbling- few person think they get the “answer” that seems right- till another stage come in. :)
kitty

Mar 28, 2011 at 12:39 am

Brilliant Introspection !
Moon scanning yourself ? :)
everyone should spend sometime in introspection and contemplation.
Very thoughtfully written !
1. Omo
  
  Mar 28, 2011 at 1:39 am
  
  Scanning the kind human! :D
sai krishna

Feb 2, 2012 at 2:49 am

thanks for sharing your experience with us :)