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Tale: Date

Tale: Date

(Date)

We’re sitting besides the lake. Not far from trees. A walkway behind us. This bench is our favorite.

Sun still bright. Sunshine playing with yellow leaves. Trees about to lose them.

“So, how was your day?” She asked and like always she smiled.

“Today is a great day!” I give my big face. “I was late at morning. On the bus, found I didn’t bring my wallet. And the keys.”

“Again!”

I love how her cute face throwing the word. Her eyebrow gives a stunning look each time I tell her about those mistakes.

My smile get bigger. “I was thinking about you!”

© Moonomo, 2011Image

10 Comments

  1. So loving! She’s always on his mind that he forgot other things, she’s the one and only that matters most! This shows true love and devotion. How lucky she is! :)

    Loved this – “I was thinking about you!” Omo, you wrapped it up so nicely! More tales, please. :):)

    1. Omo

      May be both are lucky- :)

      Thank you- will try to keep up with the trust- :D

  2. There are so many ways to express your love and here you’ve conveyed this romantically ! The feeling that this story leave you with will linger for quite some time. :)
    Loved the piece ! :)

    1. Omo

      Yes, Kitty! We convey our love in so many way- it is important to show the light to other side- :)

      Thank you!

  3. Love the picture you picked for…matched well. ;)

    1. Omo

      I’m lucky to find the picture- I almost thought I have to place empty bench instead- :)

  4. The quiet place, the whisper of the nearby lake, maybe.
    All this sets a great backdrop for a tale of love!
    The inane question and the smile take action to its peak!
    The “cute face” starts the end of the moment with a lovingly rebuke!
    The shrewd answer puts the right corollary to the story!

    Great job! Omo! Really good development. You are getting the ropes of
    short stories, it is not a small feature that, you know!

    Thank you, man!!

    1. Omo

      Wah! You pointed out my way of thinking and even in better sense!!

      I’m so pleased for all the comment that put me on table without any next tale-

      Thank you, my friend!

  5. Most of the time when I’m riding a bus.. I’m one station away from where I should go down. Simply because I think of someone special and then I forget the world. :)

    A nice piece ono! A great post to start my day :)

    1. Omo

      Hahaha! It happens- best wishes for your someone special and you- :)

      Have a great day- everyday, Aj!

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