Poem: Rainy Day – A Draft for Myself

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   Aj Banda

   Mar 18, 2013 at 8:25 pm

   i love rainy days too.. if and only if.. work is suspended.. other than that… i prefer cloudy days :)

   another nice piece

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      Omo

      Mar 19, 2013 at 10:26 am

      Thank you Aj- :))

      Rain that wont let you go to work- and rain that let you enjoy the time- other than that those days with water fall isn’t anything- ;))

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   kitty

   Mar 19, 2013 at 5:18 am

   Beautiful, Omo! I was visualizing your words.. I love the smell of first rain drops on muddy earth, earthy smell.. and yes, we can take some moment for ourselves! :)
   I, too, am waiting for a rainy day ! :))

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      Omo

      Mar 19, 2013 at 10:35 am

      Very nice, do you see how those drops are eager to meet the soil- and that of earthy smell are just the thing! :))

      Personally I would love to have a rainy day which is almost like the-end-of-the-world-type! So many days been moving fast without having enough time to take a long breath and fun around- :))

      Kitty, Rain over the river or ocean I love- I can watch the wave for entire life- :))

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   Balqis

   Mar 19, 2013 at 12:03 pm

   The lines in this poem are so heart-felt. Awesomely written poem; each line speaks of beauty, hope and desire which turn everything heavenly. So beautiful is nature that we can’t help but admire it. It does give much inspirations to us, too.

   Loved the words which you weave so beautifully in this poem. You’ve been hiding your left foot for so long! I’m so glad you’re here again presenting us with your unparalleled creativity. Always nice to read you, Omo. :))

   Your choice of pic is perfect. :)

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      Omo

      Mar 19, 2013 at 3:29 pm

      Thank you SO much BusyBee- Yes, nature beauty inspire us to keep the life UP! You know how much I appreciate your presence and kind words- :))

      Yap, left or right both hopefully will be around instead of long run to the unknown! I truly enjoy having fun with you- :))

      Glad to find this great pic- :)

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   Odliam

   Mar 19, 2013 at 11:10 pm

   I am flabbergasted, dude!!

   The Romantic in you, the soul feelings so well written, is a wonderful finding!

   Congrats for this marvelous display of nostalgic dreams brought by a lonely coffee-cup and a drop filled window pane!

   Time gives luster to your art!

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      Omo

      Mar 20, 2013 at 6:45 pm

      Don’t be! You got a friend in me- :))

      I’m great about your words, you know!!

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   Valli

   May 5, 2013 at 1:22 am

   Having a cup of hot tea listening to nature’s pitter patter melody is great joy! I ♥ rain too!!

   Lovely poem!

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      Omo

      Jul 18, 2013 at 5:26 pm

      Thanks Valli! Tea or Coffee and rain are that antisense to bring forth Good Times- :))

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