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Poem: A draft for myself

A draft for myself - Poem

(A draft for myself)

I need a place to keep myself-

Every morning I suppose to wake up late
Run for the office, ruin the breakfast
And my colleague will tell me
I forget to match my socks.

At evening I wont go anywhere
I need to keep myself alone for the night-

Enjoying the moonlight and white clouds
Listen to the blues
I would love to play guitar but I’ve to learn that
It’s not bad to have some coffee
And reading weird news on the paper

Since I’ll have my dark night
I could concentrate for the enlightenment

I need a place to keep myself
Somewhere, to do things everyman do
But I wont be one of them
My innerself wont effort to be a ordinary person
I don’t need to prove anything to anyone

I just need a place to keep myself lonely.

© Moonomo, 2011Image

17 Comments

  1. Everyone does have their wishes and needs. Hell, I’ve got so many it’s difficult to pen them down in one go the way you just did.
    Kudos for that moon!
    Your potential for writing isn’t limited to Haiku so please do explore!
    Thank you for this read :)

    1. Omo

      “A draft for myself” where myself is the reader- everyone has some kind of wishes either written in mind or the paper!

      It is difficult for me to write long poems- Let’s see If I could put some more! Thank you, Harish! ;)

  2. oh! It sounds a bit melancholic. You can be alone and sieze the freedom to accomplish your work. Yeah, having one’s own time by oneself is good. No disturbances from other, no distractions to do your own work or no one interupts when you are moon gazing and clouds watching…but alone…ummmm. Hmmmm…I love this poem. It’s so beautifully written. You conveyed the messages so precisely. Right after this, won’t disturb you. ;) You can have the time by yourself.(Kidding tells Joking!) But I feel the sombre side of it. There’s something buried deep inside the poem. And the last line says it all. I understand. I undestand.

    On the other hand, I repeat, this is such a beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing! :) (does this smile enlighten you a bit?)

    1. Omo

      BB, you always make me smile! I’m truly happy to see you around- and love to keep up with you! This isn’t my draft- it’s *just* a poem! ;)

      1. Sorry! My radar malfunctioned and detected something else! Oh! what a day! :) :)

      2. Omo

        A day- a part of life! :)

  3. Odliam

    Well!

    Wonderfuler, wonderfuler, and WONDERFULER!!!!

    I knew you have it! What else is needed!!

    Come on, dude, surprise us again and again!!

    Thank you for this gift! It is so great to read it!

    1. Omo

      Thank you, my friend! You spark something- heart breathing pleasantry air! :)

  4. kitty

    Want to read many such drafts :D ..thank you for sharing ! :)

    1. Omo

      Thank you! I need to find more drafts! :)

  5. hi just dropping by…

    1. Omo

      Thank you Air! Feel free to drop by more- ;)

  6. I love your blog! I wish I could write that way. :-)

    1. Omo

      I wish I could continue writing this way! Thank YOU! :)

  7. Nice work with the photography!
    :)

    1. Omo

      I was feeling lucky to find the photograph- credit goes to who shoot it! :)

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