(The Sun)
Path under the cloud
tangled and blurry unless
you become the sun.
Oct 5th, 2011
Haiku: The Sun
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You know, sometimes I’m really speechless after reading your Haiku. This is simply awesome! From my perception, one’s greatness is obvious and the powerful effect it has on others is undeniable. It is also the source which others really look for and depend on.
Can’t say much cos this is really good! Loved it! :)
Being Sun or Having Sun to light up our way of world- is what we need in time! Thank YOU!
WOW ! just great ! :)
That’s a pleasureful wow! Thanks Kitty- :)
Can you really be the sun? A ball of light that will uncover the darkness that is in your path…. I guess you can.. :)
nice piece again!
Thanks Aj- a person truly could be glowing as much as like the sun in time it needs! You know- what that means- :))
It’s a great photo! It energize and completes my day :) It holds a thousand words actually!!!
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It holds all the mysteries and lighten what inside of us- truly a great photo!
Beautiful haiku, Omo!!
Your light touch of light makes our inner light to light up!
Loved this!
Thank You, my friend!