Deep feelings fall into dark
You lose the light
Breaths remain cold, stone cold.
Burn it, dude! That’s hot!
Nov 17th, 2010
Sadness
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it’s a bit chillin…
hehe
Ya- Cheers the sadness! :)
I think you meant you ‘lose’ the light…
That’s right- my loose teeth! Fixed, thank you. :)
OMG! the pic tells it all. Going to be submerged in the water with deep sadness in the eyes. Deep meanings within.
Is it some kind of an attempt to recover from the “cold” situation?
IDK! The original picture has been mod a bit by me. :)
Well done! We can put our anger, frustration, sadness…whatever…in our Haikus. You’re getting better n better and can surely become my “sifu” (teacher). Like the connection of the pic with your title and wordings. Keep it up!
Thank you! This isn’t a Haiku but you’re very right! We all “sifu” of each one. It feels good to being with great people like you! ;)
Another great one Moon. You are surely growing in your writing skills. Glad the challenge inspired you to put this out.
For the reference, It was a quick poem for the “Word Challenge” on Poetic Voices where the given words was: Dark, light, cold and hot.
You can see the link for it after the image source link.
I thought it was about depression and using marijuana to lift your spirits.
Hahahaha- I thought and find it describes that, too. LOL!
There is a velvet sensuality to sadness. The photo and poem capture that beautifully. What a lovely way to turn something disliked into something admired.
Thank you, Aggie for the nice comment- good of you. Keep coming ;)
Wow, Moon!
I lost my time surfing along and losing the opportunity to read this small gem you create from such a difficult feeling, mixing up a dark perception with the obscure den of an evil turn which without light can burn!
Congrats!
:)
(I lost words, your comment gave a deep happiness!)